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| ID | Project | Category | Date Submitted | Last Update | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0028888 | Heart Of The Machine | Suggestion | Jun 19, 2024 1:19 pm | Jun 20, 2024 8:38 pm | |
| Reporter | ptarth | Assigned To | Chris_McElligottPark | ||
| Status | resolved | Resolution | fixed | ||
| Product Version | 0.549 Of Mice And Crowns | ||||
| Fixed in Version | 0.553 Fenceline | ||||
| Summary | 0028888: Your Character Made A Bad Prediction text change | ||||
| Description | The "Your Character Made A Bad Prediction" text might be changed. 1. The text swaps between 'the character' and 'your character'. I believe 'your character' would be preferred. 2. The flow of the text is a little jumpy, I propose a smoother version below. Original: In the case of the nano-seed, the character talked about how humans were making too big a deal out of how dangerous nanotech was. Then right after the accident the character thinks 'Okay, maybe the humans were right. Alternative. In the case of the nano-seed, your character was arrogant and wrong. They talked about how humans were making too big a deal out of how dangerous nanotech was. They tried to create a bunker, which then failed in a spectacular manner. Afterward the character thinks 'Okay, maybe the humans were right'. However, they haven't changed their ways and will continue to be rather dismissive of human abilities. | ||||
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| Date Modified | Username | Field | Change |
|---|---|---|---|
| Jun 19, 2024 1:19 pm | ptarth | New Issue | |
| Jun 20, 2024 8:38 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Assigned To | => Chris_McElligottPark |
| Jun 20, 2024 8:38 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Status | new => resolved |
| Jun 20, 2024 8:38 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Resolution | open => fixed |
| Jun 20, 2024 8:38 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Fixed in Version | => 0.553 Fenceline |
| Jun 20, 2024 8:38 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Note Added: 0069360 |
