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ID | Project | Category | Date Submitted | Last Update | |
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0026559 | AI War 2 | GUI | Feb 28, 2022 9:33 pm | Mar 1, 2022 1:58 pm | |
Reporter | Mac | Assigned To | Daniexpert | ||
Status | resolved | Resolution | fixed | ||
Product Version | Beta 3.905 Release Candidate 2 | ||||
Fixed in Version | Beta 3.906 Release Candidate 3 | ||||
Summary | 0026559: Pre-game Setup Map Type and Map Customization Typos and Text Issues | ||||
Description | --Map Types and Map Options ---All of them - Some ask a question for describing how the customization works, whilst others make a statement. "How connected is this map?" compared to "Linking Mechanism for Simple; controls how connected the planets are." It's ideal to keep these universal, either all presented as a question, or all presented as a statement. ---Realistic and Simple - Linking Algorithm - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. Planet Layout - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. ---Bubbles - Planets Per Bubble, Ten - Missing "." at the end of "This is the default." Random Extra Connections, Twenty - Says "Ten extra connections at random," instead of "Twenty extra connections at random," ---Chaotic - "not planar" --> "non-planar" ---Classic - Classic Connectivity - Overlapping (Default) - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. Medium - "Allows fewer connections, no no overlap." --> "Allows fewer connections, but no overlap." ---Clusters - Type of Clusters to create (Customization name should be "Create" rather than "create") - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. Either change all of them to "Uses," or change Butterfly to "Use," Random Extra Connections, Twenty - "Says Ten extra connections at random," instead of "Twenty extra connections at random," ---Clusters Microcosm - Cluster Radius - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. Random Extra Connections - Same as above issues, "Twenty" says "Ten." ---Concentric - Random Extra Connections - "Twenty" says "Ten" ---Crazy Branching - Planet Spacing Falloff, More Inverted - "a" is not necessary here, remove it. ---Cubular - "...but can multiple planets thick." --> "...but can be multiple planets thick." All customization dropdowns - Missing punctuation. Dali Style - Misleading. The description says "Whether the planets should be in straight lines" where "False" = "straight line" Consider changing description to explain that Dali Style means that the planets are NOT in a straight line. ---Dissonance - "Some areas of the galaxy are rich in planets, other areas have no planets." --> "Some areas of the galaxy are rich in planets, while other areas have no planets." Dissonance Connectivity - Overlapping (Default) - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. Medium - "Allows fewer connections, no no overlap." --> "Allows fewer connections, but no overlap." ---Encapsulated - Circle Size - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. ---Grid - Grid Type - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. Random Extra Connections - "Twenty" says "Ten" ---Honeycomb - Dissonance, Very Low - "maybe" should be two words here. Normal - "...though some interesting gaps." --> "though there are some interesting gaps." Random Extra Connections - "Twenty" says "Ten" ---Maze - Maze Type - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. Drop down options don't fit the drop down box (word wrapping issue) for the default choice "Maze D )Angles, Extra Links) (Default)" Random Extra Connections - "Twenty" says "Ten" ---Octopus - Number of Arms - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. ---Squares - Intra-Cluster Link Style - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. Cluster Size - "How large should the small clusters be?" Should probably not say "small" as the category description. ---X - Random Extra Connections - "Twenty" says "Ten" Go For Perfect Symmetry (For could be lowercase, but technically either is correct) - Final "ask" in the description should be "asked." Yes(Default) - "..., and if anything" --> "..., and, if anything," Move period to end after "for" and just make the parenthesis a new sentence, starting with "Be." | ||||
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Once I get out of the pre-game stuff, I'll probably just make an xml file and use auto formatting to make it slightly easier to read. |
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Oh, also I guess let's put this with this one: Planet Naming Style - Roman Empire - Missing "." at the end of the sentence. |
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@Chris_McElligottPark What can be done here? Is it possible to make the list wider so it can accommodate the full text without going to a second line? |
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> Some ask a question for describing how the customization works, whilst others make a statement. "How connected is this map?" compared to "Linking Mechanism for Simple; controls how connected the planets are." It's ideal to keep these universal, either all presented as a question, or all presented as a statement. I don't think this is bad to leave as it is, because I think clarity should come before consistency. I would like to hear from more people what they think about it. |
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* Fixed a large number of typos in Game Setup regarding Map types ** Thanks to Mac for providing the list For now I pushed all the other text corrected. |
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@Daniexpert: -removed "Maze" from the start of the maze types, so that they all fit in the dropdown without wrapping. |
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Thank you! |
Date Modified | Username | Field | Change |
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Feb 28, 2022 9:33 pm | Mac | New Issue | |
Feb 28, 2022 9:34 pm | Mac | Note Added: 0064983 | |
Feb 28, 2022 9:43 pm | Mac | Note Added: 0064984 | |
Mar 1, 2022 3:57 am | Daniexpert | Assigned To | => Daniexpert |
Mar 1, 2022 3:57 am | Daniexpert | Status | new => assigned |
Mar 1, 2022 5:15 am | Daniexpert | Note Added: 0064988 | |
Mar 1, 2022 5:15 am | Daniexpert | File Added: 2022-03-01 11_13_01-AIWar2.png | |
Mar 1, 2022 5:34 am | Daniexpert | Note Added: 0064989 | |
Mar 1, 2022 5:39 am | Daniexpert | Note Added: 0064990 | |
Mar 1, 2022 1:56 pm | Chris_McElligottPark | Note Added: 0065001 | |
Mar 1, 2022 1:57 pm | Daniexpert | Note Added: 0065002 | |
Mar 1, 2022 1:57 pm | Daniexpert | Status | assigned => resolved |
Mar 1, 2022 1:57 pm | Daniexpert | Resolution | open => fixed |
Mar 1, 2022 1:58 pm | Daniexpert | Fixed in Version | => Beta 3.906 Release Candidate 3 |