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IDProjectCategoryLast Update
0025032AI War 2GUIMay 27, 2021 1:34 pm
ReporterLaGrange Assigned ToDominus Arbitrationis  
Status resolvedResolutionfixed 
Product Version3.001 The Onslaught Continues 
Fixed in Version3.004 Post Processing Options 
Summary0025032: typos noted in all tutorials
Description1. Tutorial 1 - Basic Planetary Controls
        a. Tutorial Step 5/5:
            i. "before hand" should be "beforehand"
    2. Tutorial 2 - Basic Galactic Controls
    3. Tutorial 3 - Basics of Fleets and Building
        a. Tutorial Step 3/11:
            i. Delete "instead"
        b. Tutorial Step 4/11:
            i. "i.e" should be "i.e."
        c. Tutorial Step 6/11:
            i. "fleet Strike Holsis" should be "fleet Strike Haread"
            ii. "i.e" should be "i.e."
            iii. "Jorvia Guard" should be "Zeus Guard" (3 replacements here)
        d. Tutorial Step 9/11:
            i. "resources," should be "resources, metal."
            ii. "tab.." should be "tab." [last line]
        e. Tutorial Step 10/11:
            i. "Strike Holsis" should be "Strike Haread"

    4. Tutorial 4 - Basics of Resources, Technology and Hacking
        a. Tutorial Step 2/7:
            i. "represented by the anvil" [That's an anvil? It looks like a metal plate with a corner missing. :-)]
            ii. "represented by the lightning bolt" should be "represented by the battery that has a lightning bolt on it"
            iii. "resources" should be "resources'"
            iv. "anvil and lightning bolt" [change this to "metal plate and battery with lightning bolt"?]
        b. Tutorial Step 3/7:
            i. "the flask icon" [That's a flask icon? It looks like a molecule. :-)]
        c. Tutorial Step 4/7:
            i. "VII" should be "VII."
            ii. "the Fleet tab" should be "the Fleets tab"
        d. Tutorial Step 5/7:
            i. "so on." should be "and so on."
            ii. "onto" should be "on to"

        e. Tutorial Step 6/7:
            i. "the hat and eyemask icon" [I have no idea what that icon is, but it's definitely not a hat and eyemask! :-) It looks like a bundle of wires.]
            ii. "There is an Advanced Research Station here" [These still exist in the game?]
            iii. [BTW, once I started the hack, the last couple of lines of the tutorial text window were cut off. This has never happened before. You can only see the first line of "Extra tip 2".]
        f. Tutorial Step 7/7:
            i. "onto" should be "on to"
            ii. "the red menacing face icon" [It looks like a security camera icon instead, not a 'face'.]
    5. Tutorial 5 - Basics of Scouting and Vision
    6. Tutorial 99 - Read 'How To Play' For Way More Info!
        a. Tutorial Step 2/5:
            i. "as well as in the escape menu you are in-game" should be "as well as in the escape menu in-game"
        b. Tutorial Step 3/5:
            i. "little little strategy guides" should be "little strategy guides"
        c. Tutorial Step 4/5:
            i. "potential short-term, middle-term, and long-term potential objectives" should be "potential short-term, middle-term, and long-term objectives" [Remove second occurrence of "potential," as it's redundant.]
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Dominus Arbitrationis

May 26, 2021 7:24 pm

administrator   ~0061838

Took out a bunch of these. For some of these, I wasn't sure what you meant, and for others I just didn't see the text.

LaGrange

May 26, 2021 8:13 pm

reporter   ~0061844

Sorry, in the remaining 'typos,' I'm just saying that the icon doesn't seem to match the description of the icon in the tutorial. The tutorial refers to an anvil, a lightning bolt, a flask, a hat and eyemask, and a red menacing face icon. These all seem like descriptions of *earlier* icons in the game interface, not the current icons. The anvil is now a sheet of metal, the lightning bolt is now a battery, the flask is now a molecule of some sort, and the hat and eyemask is now a bundle of wires. Are you saying that these aren't discrepancies between icon description and icon?

LaGrange

May 26, 2021 8:13 pm

reporter   ~0061845

And the red menacing face is now a security camera.

Dominus Arbitrationis

May 27, 2021 11:07 am

administrator   ~0061847

I'm not seeing those descriptions anywhere in the tutorials. The closest thing is Step 7/7 of Tutorial 4, which says "The current <color=#FF5454>AIP</color> value is shown on the top bar yet again, with the red mono-eye icon." It looks like Zweihand already got these fixed.

LaGrange

May 27, 2021 1:34 pm

reporter   ~0061850

OK, I just checked, and you're right: all the icon descriptions have been updated. So thanks to the person who did that!

Issue History

Date Modified Username Field Change
May 21, 2021 6:44 pm LaGrange New Issue
May 26, 2021 7:24 pm Dominus Arbitrationis Description Updated
May 26, 2021 7:24 pm Dominus Arbitrationis Note Added: 0061838
May 26, 2021 8:13 pm LaGrange Note Added: 0061844
May 26, 2021 8:13 pm LaGrange Note Added: 0061845
May 27, 2021 11:07 am Dominus Arbitrationis Note Added: 0061847
May 27, 2021 11:07 am Dominus Arbitrationis Assigned To => Dominus Arbitrationis
May 27, 2021 11:07 am Dominus Arbitrationis Status new => resolved
May 27, 2021 11:07 am Dominus Arbitrationis Resolution open => fixed
May 27, 2021 11:07 am Dominus Arbitrationis Fixed in Version => 3.004 Post Processing Options
May 27, 2021 1:34 pm LaGrange Note Added: 0061850