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Summary 0024462: Typos in Deepstrike tooltip + wording suggestions.
Revision Feb 22, 2021 12:31 am by Ovalcircle
Description “repsonse” at the end of the first paragraph should be “response”.

“damge” in the beginning of the bottom paragraph should be “damage” .

Also: it says that “the Reserves don’t have infinite resources”, which may lead people to believe that you can “beat them”. In-game, the Reserves will keep sending units at you forever if you are in deepstrike territory with no end to them. The only way to stop the response is to leave, make the planet not be eligible for deepstrike, or be destroyed.

Also also: It says “capture or hack what needs to be captured or hacked”. I think this sounds weird and should be changed to “capture or hack any important targets”.
Revision Feb 22, 2021 12:29 am by Ovalcircle
Description “repsonse” at the end of the first paragraph should be “response”.

“damge” in the beginning of the bottom paragraph should be “damage” .

Also: it says that “the Reserves don’t have infinite resources”, which may lead people to believe that you can “beat them”. In-game, the Reserves will keep sending units at you forever if you are in deepstrike territory with no end to them. The only way to stop the response is to leave or be destroyed.

Also also: It says “capture or hack what needs to be captured or hacked”. I think this sounds weird and should be changed to “capture or hack any important targets”.
Revision Feb 21, 2021 9:01 pm by Ovalcircle
Description “repsonse” at the end of the first paragraph should be “response”.

“damge” in the beginning of the bottom paragraph should be “damage” .

Also: it says that “the Reserves don’t have infinite resources”, which may lead people to believe that you can “beat them”. In-game, the Reserves will keep sending units at you forever if you are in deepstrike territory with no end to them. The only way to end the response is to leave or be destroyed.

Also also: It says “capture or hack what needs to be captured or hacked”. I think this sounds weird and should be changed to “capture or hack any important targets”.
Revision Feb 21, 2021 9:00 pm by Ovalcircle
Description “repsonse” at the end of the first paragraph should be “response”.

“damge” in the beginning of the bottom paragraph should be “damage” .

Also: it says that the Reserves don’t have infinite resources, which may lead people to believe that you can “beat them”. In-game, the Reserves will keep sending units at you forever if you are in deepstrike territory with no end to them. The only way to end the response is to leave or be destroyed.

Also also: It says “capture or hack what needs to be captured or hacked”. I think this sounds weird and should be changed to “capture or hack any important targets”.